::Black Box::

[*Little Leprechaun Gurl*]

^^^ I really like your last two poems...they're awesome. Your last one....really went deep. I like it. Anywhoo keep it up...love always -Nik

[Gabster]

I just read Stupid Girl over again. I read it before, and remembered really liking it, so I read it again. Oh. My. God. It's amazing how much that descrbes exactly the way I feel now and so many other times. How can you think that's not good? I love it. It's worded soo well... it's amazing...it really is. I really hope you continue writing, be it poems, songs, whatever, because you're very very talented.

[Ich Liebe Rammstein]

^^^^^^
Thanks you guys! This means a lot.

[Ich Liebe Rammstein]

Ok. I wrote this song on a napkin at my grandmothers house,lol. ;D


Artificial Death
August 23,02

When I killed you
Did you think of my last breath??
When I hurt you
Did you think it'd ever last??
When I touched you
Did you cry??
When I kissed you
Did your heart float or die??


Remember. Me.

[Ich Liebe Rammstein]

I am not sure if it's a good idea to post this () But... I'm posting it anyway ;D


Columbine

I wait outside by my locker door.
Laughing and talking with friends.

I start to lean on the exit
And I push open the door.
When all of a sudden I see two faces.
And guns going off in the hall.

I stare at the boys who was my friend
And he stares back.

I stay there and wait as I watch all the kids
Their blood is splattered on the wall.

I look up at the two boys who were my friends
That's when I took the fall.

They're staring right back at me
Their eyes begging me to leave

But instead I watch them go
As I cry to myself.
First I was being me.
But at the end. I turned into someone else.

I ran up to the boys
Hoping they would stop then
I took the guns from them
And then I killed myself.

The happy day that seemed so great,
Like nothing could go wrong.

Turned into a madhouse, as I sing a sad sad song.
Where I lost my friends,
My soul, and my head.

I lie there thinking I was dead
The boy was there beside me
The other one was there too.

I was dead with them.
When the day turned black and blue.

[*Little Leprechaun Gurl*]

I dun get it....^^^

[Ich Liebe Rammstein]

^^^^^^
Well, I tried to explain it to you the other day, so i hope you got it now.... ??

¡ÈWhat¡Çs Going to Happen??¡É<br> 09/03/02
As long as we have talked for
I thought you were saying you wanted me
The way I wanted you.

Until now when I get small hints
That you¡Çre probably just saying it to say it

I want you to be truthful
Do you want me or not??
Do you love me the way you say you do??

Stop giving me weird signs
Stop saying false things
I want to know what you¡Çre feeling
And what you think of me.

I love you with all my heart.
I say ¡ÆI love you¡Ç and mean it.

I wish we could meet finally
And always be together¡Ä¡Ä<br>
I hope you feel the same way too¡Ä. ??

[Ich Liebe Rammstein]

Sorry I haven't updated in awhile..

I have written some and haven't* posted them yet..

I'll try doing it later.

[Chimera]

I write songs more than poetry,I will post some smoetime!

[Ich Liebe Rammstein]

Life
Written-- 09-22-02

Blinded
Smoothered
Pushed away
Conceited
Stupid
My Dismay
Lucky Happy
Torn apart
Nothing
Sadness
You broke my heart.

Eric-Dylan Obsession
09-22-02

They were part of me
They should understand.
They were my life.
My dream.
They are inside me.
Rest in Peace.

Boys of Disease
09-22-02

I want to know how
They could feel, so evil
Inside.

Their mastermind of
Disease, that eventually torn
Them apart.

Their creation left unhealthy.
New disires that were feared.
I want to know the
Meaning by what was right
And wrong.

The challenges were
Sober. Their
Voices unclear.

They left a
Trail of
happiness.

Because they
Were feared.

Date-Rape

I look at the man
In front of me.
A stranger I never knew

I felt his hands touch me
Then when we were done
He broke my heart.
Then killed me too.
His hands wrapped around my throat.
I tried so hard to pull away.
But I lie there dead.

I look at the man
In front of me.
A stranger I used to know.
His lover did the same to him.
As we lie there dead and cold.

[*Little Leprechaun Gurl*]

^^^ Hey heather....good work...I especially like the first one, Keep up the work

[Beautiful.Disaster]

OMG Heather. I never really read these before, but now that I have read them *actually read them, not scanned them* I realize how talented you are. Your work is so deep, and I can actually feel your pain. You are a very good poet. Keep up the good work. I wouldn't be surprised if you got published one day.

[Ich Liebe Rammstein]

aww...

Thanks you guys!

[Ich Liebe Rammstein]

hey!

ok, i wrote this one last year for an English assignment and found it, so hey, i'm posting it!


I Am

I am special and talented
I wonder what others are thinking
I hear the ocean yelling
I see the birds dancing
I want people to know that
I am special and talented.

I pretend to be a *star*
I feel the presence of an engaging ghost
I touch the hands of the famous
I worry about the world's population
I cry when I feel hurt
I am special and talented.

I understand about life itself
I say life is great
I dream of helping the homeless
I try to be the best
I hope for all to be happy
I am special and talented.
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This one, I wrote last night::

Past's Future

Alone in darkness
Death in wishes
Flesh in life.

Children laughing
Children playing
Silence holding back
Tears.

Fairies flying
*Satan falling
Playing God again.

Truth in silence
Failure in words
Nothing to do but stare.

Long dress flowing
Big hands touching
Fantasies in your mind.

Light window
Making room bright
Filled with light
Filled with *white
Alone in darkness
No more.

[Audrey]

Wow, Heather! I love your poetry, it's really raw. I love it! You are an awesome poet, girlie.

Audrey