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Post by Steph99 on Mar 26, 2003 16:52:31 GMT -5
Down Below
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Post by Steph99 on Mar 26, 2003 16:54:41 GMT -5
Here's changing my mind
Words From Me To You
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Post by Steph99 on Mar 26, 2003 16:56:18 GMT -5
The Hurt, My Friend.
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Post by Steph99 on Mar 26, 2003 16:57:05 GMT -5
The Train My life is on a train On an old creaky set of tracks I only paid half for it So the train leads me ; I don't lead it I have no control Of where it's taking me 10 minutes from now Or years from now Or how about if my train collides... on these old creaky set of tracks? But I guess it wouldn't be too bad If I collided with you Then we could mend our wounds together And strike up a conversation... ...So maybe I've misunderstood The way these old tracks are leading the train Maybe they'll end someday And switch around to the other set of tracks And you will be @ the end of it Waiting on me.
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Post by Steph99 on Mar 26, 2003 16:57:49 GMT -5
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Post by Steph99 on Mar 26, 2003 17:00:12 GMT -5
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Post by Steph99 on Mar 26, 2003 17:02:00 GMT -5
Cheap WineAny comments appreciated.
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Post by LisaRocksYourWorld, yo on Mar 27, 2003 14:53:03 GMT -5
Wow, you're really a nice addition to the poetry board. I can relate to a lot of your work, and it's nicely written. It's obvious that you've had some unfortunately inspiration for some of this... but sometimes heartache makes for the best poetry.
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Post by Steph99 on Mar 27, 2003 17:35:36 GMT -5
Thanks so much. Yeah, your right. Sometimes heartache or pain gets my juices flowing for when I'm writing.
Thanks for your comments, Lisa! God Bless!
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