Post by Lonely3Angel on Feb 13, 2002 21:00:14 GMT -5
Here's a poem that I wrote~ and I was hoping for someones opinion on it..it'd be appreciated but either or, it's not a big deal. Thank you for your time.. 
[glow=pink,2,300]*Peace N Luff*[/glow]
*Untitled*
I feel like losing you is one of the biggest things in my life.
You’ve put me through so much agonizing strife.
I cared about you and told you things..
Some things you didn’t want to believe.
But as I told you something deep from my heart,
I didn’t know it was a beginning for us to part.
You never talk to me anymore, and realizing this-it hurts
I thought I could talk to you, and try to make it work.
But you push me away, like a fragment of a dream,
Left alone, to lay near my tear-filled stream.
I thought telling you what I felt-was right
I thought it would load my heart of its’ pain and make it light.
How could you not care anymore, I thought I was a friend.
I was willing to stick with you to the end.
But yet, pushed aside and left alone I sit here and cry.
I get the impression of what you ‘felt’ was nothing but a lie.
I came to the conclusion, I am nothing but a girl.
I used to be in you’re eyes, a gleaming white pearl-
Something special and unique, I was one of a kind.
Now those eyes that once saw, fade slowly, and become blind.
Perhaps you finally saw that I was nothing, and anything but special.
Perhaps you decided I wasn’t good enough.
I want you to understand I miss you more and more each day..
I suppose that’s all I wanted to say.
[glow=pink,2,300]*Peace N Luff*[/glow]
*Untitled*
I feel like losing you is one of the biggest things in my life.
You’ve put me through so much agonizing strife.
I cared about you and told you things..
Some things you didn’t want to believe.
But as I told you something deep from my heart,
I didn’t know it was a beginning for us to part.
You never talk to me anymore, and realizing this-it hurts
I thought I could talk to you, and try to make it work.
But you push me away, like a fragment of a dream,
Left alone, to lay near my tear-filled stream.
I thought telling you what I felt-was right
I thought it would load my heart of its’ pain and make it light.
How could you not care anymore, I thought I was a friend.
I was willing to stick with you to the end.
But yet, pushed aside and left alone I sit here and cry.
I get the impression of what you ‘felt’ was nothing but a lie.
I came to the conclusion, I am nothing but a girl.
I used to be in you’re eyes, a gleaming white pearl-
Something special and unique, I was one of a kind.
Now those eyes that once saw, fade slowly, and become blind.
Perhaps you finally saw that I was nothing, and anything but special.
Perhaps you decided I wasn’t good enough.
I want you to understand I miss you more and more each day..
I suppose that’s all I wanted to say.
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I've always wanted to be able to write poems, but I can never think of the words... 
Aww you guys are so sweet...
it ;D
I can totally relate to that poem...*sigh* Anywhoo chika keep it up!