{Untitled} please read my poem.

This is a poem that I wrote... I hope you all like it... please tell me what you think:

My fantasys
are dreary...
My fantasys
untrue...
My fantasys are nothing but foggy dreams
And my dreams are nothign to you.
My dreams I have kept in my heart,
in journals and in codes, because I can tell
no one and no one my secrets, because I am ashamed.
But what can I say?
Your "no"'s are like doors locking
when they come my way...
My soul, image, heart, and religion are in battle...
In war...
Even though I wanna express myself...
I ditto and bottle up and show you my
other half, the half of lies, and ditto self so you will
accept me. But that's not who I am... but my other half bottles up my soul, image, heart and religion and instead
of fighting and roaring with rage, the stick together trying
to escape. But my mind pushes them down...
So maybe you don't know me...
Maybe you know my other half...
not that I'm a skitso
But everyone has another half...
But I will win... as I, my heart, soul, image and religion will win.
With patience.


Please tell me what you think.