What do you think of the poem that I wrote?

ae_princess
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What do you think of the poem that I wrote? Mar 14, 2002 16:51:21 GMT -5

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Post by ae_princess on Mar 14, 2002 16:51:21 GMT -5

What do you think of my poem that I wrote?
« on: Mar 7th, 2002, 7:07pm »

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Hold Me In Your Heart

Hold me in your heart
Don't ever let me go
Whisper to me softly
Always let me know

Forever in my dreams
You will always be
Hold me in your heart
Forever you and me

If the time should ever come
That we should have to part
Always remember me
Hold me in your heart

Hold me in your heart
Don't ever let me go
Whisper to me softly
Forever I shall know

dizzyupthegirl Full Member definition of hot: look at that ^^^ Posts: 370	What do you think of the poem that I wrote? Mar 15, 2002 14:58:23 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by dizzyupthegirl on Mar 15, 2002 14:58:23 GMT -5 ^^^ applause very cool..... ;D
	Love is a leap of faith, take a risk, dare to move. Love is like the wind, you cant see it, but you can feel it. " I rather spent a day loving you, than an eternity not knowing you"

BX_Finest_Girl New Member I Be The Girl You Envy Posts: 74	What do you think of the poem that I wrote? Apr 2, 2002 14:39:30 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by BX_Finest_Girl on Apr 2, 2002 14:39:30 GMT -5 thats so nice ;D i like it alot you should write more poems
	~ROSES ARE RED~&&~LEAVES ARE GREEN~&&~SCREW YOU BITCHES I'M THE QUEEN~&&~I'M THE QUEEN AND I HAVE CLASS~ &&~MESS WITH ME AND I'LL KICK YOUR AZZ~

thevoicewithin Full Member Posts: 421	What do you think of the poem that I wrote? Apr 6, 2002 10:39:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by thevoicewithin on Apr 6, 2002 10:39:56 GMT -5 thats a really good poem.
	I love Hayden!

Punk Rebelist New Member Not Quite Punk Yet Posts: 8	What do you think of the poem that I wrote? Jun 30, 2002 14:49:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Punk Rebelist on Jun 30, 2002 14:49:11 GMT -5 I usually don't like rhyming..but that one fit so perfectly! i loved it.. -punk

What do you think of the poem that I wrote?

Post by ae_princess on Mar 14, 2002 16:51:21 GMT -5

Post by dizzyupthegirl on Mar 15, 2002 14:58:23 GMT -5

Post by BX_Finest_Girl on Apr 2, 2002 14:39:30 GMT -5

Post by thevoicewithin on Apr 6, 2002 10:39:56 GMT -5

Post by Punk Rebelist on Jun 30, 2002 14:49:11 GMT -5