Bright angels poetry :)

[bright_angel]

I am always sad im always down, yet inside me there is a sound telling me to stop, because I know theres a bright side in life, to change my gloomy days and lonely nights.  

I’m trying to end these tears and have no fair, though this person is making things harsh, I’m not going to give up.  I want to make some luck, in my life to face away….even though for now I have to stay. I’m going to leave this grump soon, mabe if I wish upon a fall moon, or  even cry all night in my room. If there’s a will there’s a way, It’s  telling me I should go away, from these miserable days…My days going to come, and there comes some fun. But I must first work hard with peace and get some sleep…for tomorrow im going to find a way, not to stay with this man. And im never going to give up, because if I do It  may bring  bad luck…

[violet_rose]

hey Sally!

I like the way you have used alot of thought though keep in mind when you are writing a poem to set it out like this:

I am always sad
I'm always down
yet inside me there
is no sound
telling me to stop

I know theres a
bright side in life
to change
my gloomy days
and lonely nights

Other then that *good effort!*