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Post by Audrey on Nov 12, 2002 13:01:47 GMT -5
A few of my poems:
She Cries
She can't help But to feel lonely sometimes. She's got real talent She's brilliant But it doesn't matter She's unoticed
Whimsical Dream
Periwinkle Colors The bluest skys The stariest nights No pain, no suffering No crying, no more. Love, Peace, Happiness. What a whimsical dream! Only, it's not a dream. It's beautiful. It's Heaven.
The 0nly Place
It's the only place! The only place In The World Where I feel safe I wish I could find that place.
That's all for now, more later. Please, comment!
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Post by Audrey on Nov 21, 2002 16:22:04 GMT -5
The Fire Inside
She's burning inside To Share Her Thoughts But She's Overshadowed Her freedom is gone in her soul Her appearence is her soul To the cruel world So her opinions don't matter to them Even though she's the one with the fire inside.
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Post by Audrey on Nov 23, 2002 11:13:39 GMT -5
Don't make me smile
It's hard enough to say goodbye Without looking into your eyes And all I want to do is cry You love me, you say I believe you. I feel the same way But, I have to let go But my arms are still clinging to you My heart is still in love with you You brush my cheek Kiss me and all of a sudden the world is a better place Now its not the same I'm leaving you now, my arms swiftly let go I look into your eyes, all I want is to cry Don't make me smile
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Post by Audrey on Nov 23, 2002 11:34:53 GMT -5
Unique
I have my beliefs I am strong I am faithful I have longed I have suffered I am weak I am me I am the one and only No one is the same as me I am just unique.
Tears (this is part two of She Cries in my 1st post.)
Her tears start streaming down her face Oh! What a disgrace You don't want to be her friend She's not loveable.
I know I've let you down
I shrug, my Lord I apoligize I've sinned I've let you down All I have is you Please forgive me.
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Post by Audrey on Nov 23, 2002 17:32:20 GMT -5
Kiss
You make me smile I giggle You tickle me I laugh You lean in I lean in closer You close your eyes I keep mine open Our lips meet And for one moment I and You are Me.
I wish you were here
I am going to miss you I can't imagine not seeing you everyday I can't imagine feeling this way before I am going to miss you I do not feel the same I have to move away I am going to miss you I wish you were here I wish I was there I just want to see you again
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Post by Gabster on Nov 23, 2002 17:40:13 GMT -5
Wow, Audrey. You have real talent...your poems are awesome. You have the ability to put exactly what you're feeling down, and make it so that it's clear to the rest of the world.
I really liked, "Don't Make Me Smile". It's something I could totally relate to, and it's just so...true.
Keep up the good work!
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Post by Audrey on Nov 23, 2002 19:25:45 GMT -5
^Thanks. I have notebooks and notebooks full of poems so you'll have to hear more. Untitled I'd give up forever to kiss you Because you've seen my diffrently somehow You're the closest to love I'll ever be I don't want to say goodbye right now I would give anything for that one moment All I can see clearly is the light But sooner or better it be over I would plead to know you were mine I don't want the world to see you I want to keep you by myself But sooner rather than later it's gonna be over I wish I could stay with you the rest of my life But I have to let go now I wanna hold on
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Post by Audrey on Nov 24, 2002 13:37:11 GMT -5
11 poems so far, 93 to go. Weee! I just wrote this one today, this is a poem about the "first love" and how bad it hurts when you lose it.: FadedYou saw me when I was invisible Lost without a trace I saw you, too From there on I knew you were the one Then you broke my heart In 1,000 pieces on the floor I locked myself in my room for days My life is not worth living without you anymore You called me today, I dared not to pick up the phone You came over, my friends tell you I'm not home I must not see you, as my heart mends from this I love you, still. Somewhere, inside here. As I pick up the pieces one by one And replace them in my soul My first love is fading away forever more
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