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Post by Gabster on Dec 26, 2002 21:50:18 GMT -5
^^^ Your *second* attempt? Dang! That's really good...definitely keep writing! You've got talent! ;D
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Post by lovebug0508 on Dec 28, 2002 14:03:25 GMT -5
Night Sky <---whats with me and these cheezy titles?! ;D ;D A single pearl against black velvet cloth Surrounds itself with glittering diamonds. The smooth folding time encloses us both. Wishing upon a star in the heavens, To know the shimmer of your eye tonight, Is looking uponthe same star I spy. Our minds beginning to think of a ploy To once again hold each other in arms, So soft and willing to share that embrace. And having to wait to see your sweet face Is stealing petty pieces of my mind, As I search the night sky for my love. A twinkling light in the corner, there Illuminating our bodies and souls, Sitting together against the night sky. Remembering our time is all I have To keep in my heart alive our passion. Until this night sky shows you again.
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Post by strangelilboi on Mar 24, 2003 16:18:54 GMT -5
Go Not With Her
Go not with her, young lad. Be not tempted by her promiscuous soul, Her clarity as it may seem So clear to you.
Go not with her, Down that stony staircase Into the mini-chasm where Fate, Fate she claims she can see.
Go not with her, fair creature. Be not entwined by her magical grasp, Her pagan leanings. For promise of power, hence happiness.
Go not with her, To see that which she wish That you dream, Invoked by the entrancement That you find yourself in.
Go not with her dear prince, Save for your doom…<br> Adel Mayadeen
Inspired by The Lord of the Rings by JRR Tolkein
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