Wrote a good one? posted here!

[dizzyupthegirl]

this is the place where u can post your poetry. Instead of having a topic for every single person that wants to post a poetry.. how about creating a topic that everyone can just post their own poems?!
So all of u poets out there........ *yesyou* post your poems here and share it wit us!

[vbkimber07]

Good Idea.  Well, most of my poems aren't that good, but I'll post one just to get us started.

Falling.
I resolved I'd never go there
Made a promise to myself
Not the anger, not the hurt,
I'd leave that to everyone else.

But then I fell, I fell hard
Along with all the rest
Promises made long ago
Did not still pass the test

I see him in a new way now
A different kind of light
Strong and Nice what happened here?
I love him with all my might.

Help me now, I am stuck
Never have I loved like this before
Every time I think of him
I want him more and more.

Yeah, I warned you, not very good.  I have some better ones.  I will post them here when I find them!!

[dizzyupthegirl]

^^ thats good......awesome *applause*

Time passed by
I stood still
I cant move on
When i reliaze your forever gone

You're still here
Right by my side
Your still there
shining me your light

Said I luv u once
When we were still young
Said that we're just gonna be friends
And i know we will till the end.

But time passed by
And i just stood still
You've luv sum1 else thats true
but from the beggining till the end
I'll luv u

[vbkimber07]

Thanks dizzyupthegirl (confidence goes up about 20,000 notches).  I like your poem too.   it made me cry!!  Well, not quite.  If I could say one thing, I know it's just the internet, but it would be easier to read if you put the work you instead of the letter u.  Anyway.  I guess I'll post another.  I personally think this one is better.

Jealousy

The pang of jealousy, of hurt, of pride
Shoots through every corner inside.

Everytime I see or hear him
The possibilities grow ever dim

He says her name, I feel his hurt
Gosh she treated him like dirt.

I'll never again feel the same warm glow
Although I long to do just so.

Pick up the phone, say my name
I won't use you for a game.

Why can't you see, I'm really true?
The feeling goes way past blue

A shattered love, feelings tart,
Nothing's like a broken heart.

Untitled (yet)

All through my life, lucky me
I've been told
I could do anything, be anything I want
But now I'm no longer sure
If I'm able
To do anything
Are there unsurpassable obstacles,
Or are they just imagined?
Can I make it,
Or will I fall along the way?
If I do, will someone stop
to pick me up
Or just leave me
Hopes and dreams crushed
Within grasp, far away
Will I?
Can I?
Could I?
Pick myself up
Off of the ground
Gather up my strength and courage
to try again
fail again
succeed.

[Ich Liebe Rammstein]

ok,cool....

          Written:: June  ,2001

  "The Day I Died"

The day I died
Was all too clear
The pain the suffering
Was all in fear.

The Christmas lights
Were flashing red,
Until I felt something
Hit my head.

Now I'm gone,
As I sit here and stare
And people are watching,
Without a care.

Now I wish that I was alive,
So that I could look back
At that painful dive.

My family is waiting.hoping to know
While Im drifting away
In the quiet snow.

Now I find that my heart
Is dead.
Now I know that this is
   The End.


                      ~~~~~~Heather,(Edward  Furlong,Mike Shinoda,Chester Bennington,KidRock & Joe C. LOVER!!!!!! Linkin Park RULES!!!!!!)

[Ich Liebe Rammstein]

Oh and here's my other (fav.) one  ::


                Written:: November 23,2001



               "Being Depressed Isnt An Issue"


I wake up at night
Only to see your light
Shining through the surface
Of my dead body.

My passion is a legacy
My grace is my pride
Your the only one that
Loves me.

The suicide awakens me
The interest in my death
The dolls are coming for you
My life is ending still...

Im afraid of dying,yet still
Afraid of life.

The first one to admit it
Was so far behind.

My lonliness is killing me
The hunger for truth is near.

My blood is thirsty for
Fear,though my skin is
Withering away.

My face  is turning purple
My hands are turning blue
My  life has already ended
But no one cares....

       Because:
   Being Depressed Isnt An Issue..





       ---------------
        There's another version,where at the end it says, "But no one cares,because to them: Being depressed isnt an issue" But that one is the/my orginal one..

[vbkimber07]

^^Chilling--but very good.

[dizzyupthegirl]

^^^ wow... thats good LinkinPark_girl

[Ich Liebe Rammstein]

^^^^^^
Hey,you guys thanX..As you can probably tell,Im depressed alot,so I manage to write what I feel

[dizzyupthegirl]

wow.......... long time since i last been here....
Well i wrote sum stuff up in the last couple of days. I felt way too many emotions this week. Probably cuz of the quarter ending so soon..... ARGH......... I hate report cards.

" I never knew"

I never knew what friendship is
Or the thought of being missed
I never knew that a single phone conversation
Could give all of my problems its explanation
I neve rknew that when you talk to me
You could make me laugh, cry, happy and crazy
I never knew that it is easier to share secrets
than having them locked up in me...
Especially when i tell my secrets to you,
My talking diary.
I neve rkne wthat being my true self is all i have to do
making me realize that our friendship is true
I would have never know all of these,
If it hasnt been for you.


-Untitled-

Uncover me
peeled off my skin
One by one
I'll show you my sin

I have never done this
it's a first
Everyone stand a bit farther
like im a curse

You stand a bit closer
You're by my side
And when you said you wont judgje me
I know you're right

So I uncover my skin
one by one
WHen i hesitate
you pushed me gently to go on

I could see the pain in your face
yet understanding in your eyes
And you left with a question
of how i cud have survive

Now you know
all my anger, all my pain, all my harm
I thought you'll run away
instead you keep me safe in your arms.

[Ich Liebe Rammstein]

^^^^^^
W0W...did ya write that (one) yourself?? That was GrEat !!!!!!  

[Michaelangelo]

This is a poem I wrote recently for an English assignment about All Quiet on the Western Front. It's untitled.

exploding stars flash overhead,
beauty is in the death
watching the fireworks rain down
as slowly as time moves,

on a warm sunny day
relaxing with your brothers
in a bright field.

the fight is for your state
and your family back home,
watching a school boy scream to death
you do it for the people.

I'll be back soon with some more. Hm...now what did I do with that teenage-angst-love poem? *riffles through her papers*
Love,
~The Kitten~

[sweet_dreams]

exploding stars flash overhead,
beauty is in the death
watching the fireworks rain down
as slowly as time moves,

^^that's  :-*beautiful kitten, those words capture me the most ;D

[tam]

I understand

I see you walking down the halls
Although you try to blend with the walls
You are the one who stands out the most.

The shutters of your face are closed,
So we never know what you think.
Never a smile a frown or a tear,
Never even a wink.

Yet every day
I try to say
Something nice
To brighten your day.

But never an answer
Asmile or a 'hey'
Sometimes you don't even look my way

When I say
"Do you want to come home with me today?
Maybe we'll talk
Maybe we'll play?"
And I'd give anything just to hear you say,
"OK"
But I know it'll never be that way.

And I know it's not you
And I know you're not rude.
There are thngs on your mind
That affect your mood.

How I wish we could be
Best friends once again,
But I know it'll never
Be the same
Because when you get home today,
You'll go through it again.

What do you think? I got inspiration froma book I read.

[lovebug0508]

OK! It's my second total life time attempt at poetry...so dont poke too much fun ;D and yea...gotta love the oh-so original title huh? hehe...It's a sonnet, just so you can try to understand the pattern.

Heart's Desire

Who will be the one to heal my anguish?
A gift to mend the mind and heart alike.
The burden meant for me to languish,
And scream inside for a twin soul to strike.
Is it a charming thing to know that my
Heart aches with the need for warmth and passion?
Wondrous ability to deny
The dreams my mind recalls for you to ration.
You shall be what my soul cries for in haste,
When you have seen your heat’s desire.
For all found to cherish shall not be waste,
We give our love the wings to fly higher.
Building our lives with one and each other,
The burden together we can smother.


Ta da! I feel like breaking out in song hehe...