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Post by Ich Liebe Rammstein on Aug 15, 2002 16:55:50 GMT -5
Wow. I can't even begin to descibe how great those were! They really touched me in ways I haven't been touched in awhile. Those were better than mine! Those were great. I have written songs too. About a couple are in my thread. Yet again, thse were awsome and I hope you keep writing if not posting.  |
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Post by Ich Liebe Rammstein on Aug 16, 2002 20:13:55 GMT -5
Again. These were great.. What else is cool is that instead of reading them, I sing them...I've already got a tune to "He'll Break Your Heart Too" and "My Everything, My All" . |
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Post by Ich Liebe Rammstein on Aug 18, 2002 14:47:09 GMT -5
Again...and again.. I love them! You have a talent. |
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Post by Ich Liebe Rammstein on Aug 19, 2002 17:51:33 GMT -5
Again, it was great! Hehe..  So when did you write (all of) these?? |
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Post by Ich Liebe Rammstein on Aug 19, 2002 21:47:59 GMT -5
Hehe.cool. Btw. Don't throw anyway away..ever!! Keep them next time. Even if it looks like a little baby wrote it. I save A LOT of stuff and sometimes wish I could just throw it all away, but after reading most of it it is sooo funny!! hehe...... ;D |
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Post by ¤SassySteph0248¤ on Aug 31, 2002 19:09:53 GMT -5
Those are all REALLY good!! ;D The ones I like the most are: Your Lying Arms Alone Before I Fell For You My Everything, My All Inside Out Things Left Unsaid Who Do You Turn To? Hehe that's like most of them.... Keep on writing, I'll be looking forward to more! |
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Post by canola4life on Sept 22, 2002 16:17:39 GMT -5
that was oneof those things that's really easy to like because we can all relate. thanks for putting that up
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Post by DancinQT7610 on Sept 27, 2002 17:27:56 GMT -5
WOW! Those were absolutely amazing! You are very talented. I would like to hear you sing them. They are all beautiful. I can't pick a favorite. ;D
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Post by Gabbie on Oct 12, 2002 13:13:23 GMT -5
omg, Gabi, those were amazing! Never throw at a song again, ever, those could be #1 hits, I'm so serious. So many people could relate to them on such different levels, most of them was like reading my life story. I love them keep posting them.
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Post by LisaRocksYourWorld, yo on Oct 13, 2002 11:33:37 GMT -5
"Another day, another drama
Let’s multiply our problems by five
And let’s act like we don’t know what we’re doing
As we slowly ruin people’s lives."
Wow... Just... Wow.
All of Lonely Tears really touched me, too, since I can totally relate.
I wish I couldn't relate to your work, but I can. And most of it touches me so much with all the feelings that I wish I didn't have to experience. You do a great job of putting that down. Keep writing!
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Post by Audrey on Nov 18, 2002 15:48:34 GMT -5
^
The surface is glassy
But the water is deep
Love is expensive
But heartache is cheap
O0oh! Cool! Great song lyrics! ;D
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Post by Gabbie on Dec 2, 2002 17:58:31 GMT -5
wow, Gabi, these just keep getting better and better, but the last two ones were AMAZING! and so true to my life.
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Post by Starr29 on Jan 3, 2003 19:38:57 GMT -5
*hideously loud and fast applause* You have AMAZiNG talent!
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Post by Gabbie on Jan 14, 2003 19:29:44 GMT -5
Gabi, have I told you how much I LOVE your songs? Well, in case I haven't, I LOVE THEM! Because even though some of them might be a little sad, they are all so true.
Your song, Hero, OMG!!! I wanted to cry.
Gaby
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Post by LisaRocksYourWorld, yo on Jan 25, 2003 21:00:25 GMT -5
^^^Wow... Just wow. My mouth was open as I sat reading that, because not only was it so beautifully worded, but also because I felt everything you said. That was completely amazing. You need to write some more random prose like that more often... And even if you gave it a structure, it could easily be a song. Beautiful, completely wonderful. I liked this also: <<Please don’t ask me what’s wrong To tell you would be suicide Please ask me about my unhappiness Maybe this time I won’t lie>> |
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